Emma - Your magazine looks professional and looks like it would reach the target audience, however it could use a few brighter colours and another photo shoot as there is only one.
Ella - The layout is neat and stylish and the mast head looks good, however the colours aren't vibrant enough to catch peoples eye.
Jemma - the layout of the double page is sleek, but the blue background on the contents and front page doesn't give enough impact. She likes the font on the left of the contents page but there is not enough impact on the front cover.
Sonia - It could do with a bit more bolder fonts, the pictures are relevant to the magazine genre, also the double page spread looks professional with good quotes which are easily seen. Also the pattern on the tour dates column looks good. The continuation of the lines on the double page also makes it look well thought out.
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